Free pixabay photo During my rewriting process on my blog week 3 reading task, I used the comments as a guide to help me write from a personal aspect. I learned for my next peer review to give comments that will help them when it comes around to doing the rewriting it will benefit them to better their blog. I learned that it's good to break down facts and use a numbered list when giving information and that my blog post was clearly laid out. I was happy to rewrite my blog post because I knew I wanted to change it from a personal view rather than an article. The comments really helped me to change my post because they were really specific on what they thought such as “ . I liked when Kelly broke down facts into bullet points to make them more precise. When Kelly gave her point of view it showed that she researched her topic thoroughly and it made her blog more relatable. Jenny”, “ The post is very clearly laid out, and the paragraphs are concise and informative. “ In conclusi...